Anna's Persuasive Writing

Having more time at kids day.
 

This is my persuasive writing

To: Hokitika Mayor

From : Anna



Did you know if kids have more time at kids day, they will be able to learn how to take turns and also make new friends, because most kids around New Zealand will go to kids day.My name is Anna and I have come to convince you to let kids have more time at kids day.


For kids day if we spend that normal time, the money to buy the toys will go up to around $1860 but if we have double time at kids day, then the money will only rise up to $3720. The kids day Aotearoa website says that kids day isn't just about playing and getting toys, but it is really about teaching kids how to listen to each other and understanding everyone, to do that they have to make up fun games.


At kids day we normally have games like duck shooting or even paint shooting. There are ball throwing in holes, haunted houses, 3d movie trucks, prize houses,art tents and tents that have food,drinks and fun amazing games.

Some people might say that parents might be too tired to bring kids to kids day  for too long. I think that we can organize busses to come to every single house in the town to  bring kids to kids day, the parents won't be tired of taking care of children.


I hope using all those reasons is enough to change kids day. Please have a think about letting us kids have more time on kids day. Thank you for taking your time to listen to me, I hope you enjoyed it.



Thank you

From : Anna